Elliot
K. Carnucci is a Big Fat Loser
Publisher: BookBaby
Published: Oct. 21, 2013
ASIN: B00G3IUEDG
Amazon Synopsis:
The kids at Ralph Bunche Middle School
love to pick on Elliot Kravitz-Carnucci. He struggles with his weight, looks
like a geek, makes top honors, and lives above the Carnucci Home for Funerals
in South Philadelphia with his distant, workaholic father and Nonna, his
quirky, overbearing grandmother.
Since his parents divorced, he splits
spending his time with his funeral director father and his mother Rayna, who
dreams of becoming the queen of commercials on the west coast.
At the hands of his peers, Elliot
experiences a series of bullying episodes that escalate
Elliot has a small circle of loyal
friends and a mentor named Duke, an aging school custodian, who root for him to
overcome his bullying issues so that he can enjoy his life as a teenager and a
budding singer/performer. Can Elliot win his fight against the nasty bullies,
or is he doomed forever? Read this funny, sad, and crazy book to find out.
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Excerpt:
“Help–I
can’t breathe–let me out. Somebody help...”
I
pounded the inside of the musty supply closet until my knuckles turned blue.
Did anybody even have the key?
What
if they don’t come? What if I’m trapped here all night?
I
could hear loud voices and laughing, so I knew Kyle Canfield and one of his
friends from the basketball team were there, waiting to see if I would cave in
and plead for mercy.
The
bell blared. Classes changed. Kids stampeded through the halls. Then, silence.
Finally
I heard someone shout, “I’ve got the key, Doc.”
“Thanks,
Duke,” Doc Greely, the assistant principal, said to Mr. Boardly, the man who’d
sprung me loose.
Mr.
Boardly, the head custodian, better known as Duke, offered me his arm, and I
stumbled out of the closet. He was as thin as his mop handle, but all muscle–no
flab like me. A scruffy white beard covered half his face.
He
slammed the closet door shut and bolted the lock. “One of the hall guards
reported noise coming from this area. We came as soon as we heard.”
Duke
patted my shoulder. “Let me know if I can help, Elliot.” I could hear his keys
clanging as he walked down the hall humming “Duke of Earl,” that old sixties
song he loved. That’s where he got his nickname.
“Up
to their old tricks again, Elliot?” Doc asked on the way to his office.
My Thoughts:
Elliot
K. Carnucci is one of those high school students that seem to have a sign
pasted on their foreheads that says "Pick on me!" He's overweight,
dresses differently than most of the other students, doesn't have one of the
"popular" haircuts, is extremely smart, is non-athletic and has
almost no friends. To top it off, Elliot lives with his dad who is a funeral
director and their house is the local funeral home.
He's
doing everything he can to stay below the radar and keep out of the bullies
way. He's refuses to rat out on them because he knows that will make things
worse. He's even done their homework. Nothing seems to work. They just get
meaner and meaner.
Fortunately
he does have an ally in the school janitor. Mr. or "Duke" as he's known to the
students has reported the bullies several times to the administration several
times. But the principal want to hear from Elliot.
Elliot
K. Carnucci is a Big Fat Loser is an excellent book about youth
being bullied and the extent to which it can get. This novel clearly
demonstrates that "staying below the radar" does not work. It is
important to stand up to the bullies. Everyone, whether they witness the act,
or are bullied themselves, need to report the incident so that the bully
realizes that they have no power.
I
liked the advice that Duke gave Elliot. Reach out and make some friends. Kids
that are loners are much more likely targets. This can be a really difficult
thing for some students to do, particularly if they are having mental health
issues like depression or if they are just really shy. School clubs that help
get students to know others or anti-bullying groups could be a good way to get
potential bully target students involved in groups where they could be safer.
I
was surprised that Kyle was able to get away with as much bullying as he did
before he got expelled. Things could have turned out much worse than they did.
I
think the author did an excellent job of character development in this story. I
felt very sad at the loss of Elliot's friend. I think he was a big loss to the
school community as a whole.
The
only negative comment I would make is that the author said the doctor told
Elliot they would run some lab tests to see if he had a concussion. A
concussion is generally diagnosed through a series of questions of the injured
person.
I
thought that this book was very entertaining and educational and would hold the
attention of students in the middle grade range (grade 4-7). I would recommend
it to schools and families who want to discuss bullying and what to do about
it. I gave Elliot K. Carnucci is a Big Fat Loser a rating of 4 stars out
of 5.
Thank
you to the publisher who provided a copy of the book in exchange for a fair and
honest review. A positive opinion was not required All thoughts are my own.
About the Author:
Catherine
DePino has sold thirteen books for parents, teachers, and children to
mainstream publishers. She self-published her fourteenth book, Elliot K.
Carnucci is a Big, Fat Loser: A Book About Bullying because she wanted to give
it a wider forum. Her background includes a BS in English and Spanish
education, a Master’s in English education, and a doctorate in Curriculum
Theory and Development and Educational Administration from Temple University.
The author worked for many years as an English teacher, department head of
English and world languages, disciplinarian, and curriculum writer in the
Philadelphia School District. After this, she worked at Temple as an adjunct
assistant professor and student teaching supervisor.
Catherine
has also written articles for national magazines, including The Christian
Science Monitor and The Writer.
For
many years she served on the board of The Philadelphia Writers’
Conference. She holds membership in the
Association of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators.
Her
new self-help book, 101 Easy Ways for Women to De-Stress, Reinvent, and Fire Up
Your Life in Retirement,appeared on the market in March, 2014.
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Just reading through the blurb made me feel sad.
ReplyDeletemarypres(AT)gmail(DOT)com
Yes, Mary, parts of the story were sad, but if you want to read the book, you'll find that it's also filled with some happy and funny moments. Thanks for writing!
DeleteCatherine
Thanks, Mary. If you read the whole book, you'll find that there are some funny and happy moments too. Thanks for your interest!
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Thanks for hosting!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kathryn, for hosting me and for the positive review. I greatly appreciate it.
ReplyDeleteIt was a pleasure.
DeleteHere's a question for your readers: When is it best to never talk to a bully?
ReplyDeletefrom Catherine D.
Nice review
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I thought so too. Thanks!
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